Should the employees be considered when making the decisions for the company?

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Should the employees be considered when making the decisions for the company?

Decision making is very crucial to the success of any company. Should the employees be included in the decision-making process is the moot question. I will express complete agreement that the employees should be considered as a part of decision making and will offer reasons to support my viewpoint.

The employees of any company are a source of knowledge and information. Taking the opinion and prestigious views of the employees not only reduces the cost of the company for the outsourcing but it also helps to increase their self-confidence, they give them the acute feeling that they are the part of the organization, boosts up the teamwork spirit, enhances the communication skills and heightens their overall morale.

The managers at the same time should take care that the critical information, the employees have is not revealed in the outer world. The plans and strategies which are accumulated as a result of the decision making are meant to be secret and not to be revealed. If any similar kind of activity is found by any employee the action should be taken against him accordingly.

To warp up, in the view of above discussion, it can be seen that the benefits of the involving the employee in the decision making outweighs the demerits so I will hold the same opinion that employees should be considered a component of this process.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nsidered a component of this process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, kind of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95614035088 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91959027723 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.4169415641 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.555555556 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504011716854 0.242375264174 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209676025394 0.0925447433944 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101814672831 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293817810939 0.151781067708 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10797233843 0.0609392437508 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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