Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation? Why?
Although such topics, likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, the constructive dialogue on government should invest more money in traffic focus more on developing public transportation has erupted endless controversy can lead to a thought-provoking discussion. my view is that I believe the government spend more money on buses, trains and subway investment as public vehicles are used to serve a large number of people in society and decrease the amount of carbon released into the air, and I shall put my forth in this essay.
To commence with, carbon emission cut is significantly essential for protecting the atmosphere and the more car and motorbikes are on the roads. it is also important to note that when the ozone layer is damaged because the government use more money to improve roads, more people drive their private cars to work. for stance, a study shows that the atmosphere can cause skin which cancer and destroys the natural environment, and this shows the importance people are inclined to use less private vehicles, which decreases the amount of carbon released. Thus, the policy that concentrates money on developing public transportation brings an advantageous impact on the earth.
In addition, the policy would play a pivotal part in relieving traffic jam and is quite clear that traffic congestion is a serious problem in many big cities. it is vital to observe that while the main reasons for this issue are that there are a great number of vehicles flowing on reasons, So tackle the problem and governments have to turn people attention on public vehicles to reduce cars and motorbikes. hance, there is the possibility that improving roads and highways do not seem to reach the major cause of traffic congestion, has proven it's important to both individuals and society.
In conclusion, I see equally potential evidence that supports the arguments I have provided above. hance, I believe that high-quality roads and highways make it easier to move around and public transportation systems even have more important advantages because they not only ease traffic jam but also protect the atmosphere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1207.87684729 150% => OK
No of words: 347.0 242.827586207 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20461095101 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88531779152 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553314121037 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 379.143842365 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6611647242 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.181818182 104.977214359 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 20.9669160288 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306834342558 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993345398725 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901134253581 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162572323249 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095260192553 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 12.6369458128 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.