Should sports classes be sacrificed in high school so student can concertrate academic subject ?
The importance of sports classes be sacrificed in high school which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion . the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years . in my opinion the former latter proposition appears to be more rational .this essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical .
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems form the fact that school games children was healthy body and mind is fresh needless to say all these merits stand in a good stead .
Elaborating my viewpoint there are some more merits demerits but one of the crucial effects is that health is wealth fit body strong body teacher is school sports hence it is apparent why many are against in favour of this trend .
According to argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits drawbacks of sports classes be sacrificed in high school are indeed too great dire ignore healthy mind resides in a healthy body ?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6039084619 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605911330049 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4486618033 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.166666667 104.977214359 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 20.9669160288 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17384341024 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090404580467 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918827852817 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10868227623 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789006592756 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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