Social media should be banned. Agree or disagree
In this rapidly evolving era, technological development was impacting on several paths such as transportation, business environment and communication. However, social media was the latest development of communication. There are different types of social media such as Facebook, Whats App, Instagram and Twitter. Even though some people think that social media should be banned and some argue that, it must be free and does not need to ban. This essay discuss how will social media impact to the individuals and why it shouldn’t be ban.
Governments do not need to get rules and regulations for social media because most of individuals are getting information from social media such as Gossips, breaking news and chatting with person who was in another country. As an example, our family member has gone to overseas when you can chat, call or video call with him without any cost because you have need only clear internet connection. On the other hand social media users were increasing rapidly and there user friendly to all. Thus, in present social media was the most of common and fastest way of getting information than other media.
Unfortunately, some believe social media should be prohibition because it was spreading fake news in easily whilst it may be broken some government rules and regulations. As an example, war reporters in a country, they have to singed many rules according to situation but in social media have not page creators or account creators because it has many fake pages and accounts. As a result of this china and some middle east countries were prohibited social media.
Social media was the fastest and user friendly method in the internet today. When all the reasons and examples have considered and evaluated, in my opinion, we cannot live without technological development so, social media should not be banned today because most of individuals have literacy for understanding everything thus, every country must need to develop their human literacy for go through with technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: What's
...types of social media such as Facebook, Whats App, Instagram and Twitter. Even though...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
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... situation but in social media have not page creators or account creators because it...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
...edia should not be banned today because most of individuals have literacy for understanding everyth...
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...cy for go through with technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 328.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21646341463 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79501846103 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3881314094 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314430864496 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13472568571 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069513293204 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211467317531 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448717655785 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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