Some companies focus their efforts on product development, some others focus more on promotions(discounts, special offer, etc) which approach do you agree to? Explain your reasoning.
These days, there is a controversial debate among people about the impacts of effort of companies. There are a great number of people who interpret the focus on product development as thoroughly constructive, while other hold an opponent view. I am inclined to be believe that companies should focus their efforts on product development and this should be promoted.
There are several reasons why focus on product development is advantageous. First of all, it is argued that such activities play a pivotal role in creating adroit people, this is attributed to the fact that it could relieve the stress of consumers, therefore would create a feeling of accomplishment and competence, which would open avenues to new achievements so consumer s' enthusiasm and determination will be amplified toward many daunting tasks.
In addition, it is claimed that some measures can be taken by government to stimulate buyers to choose from local commodities, this is to say that, buyers have a wider range of chooses for more affordable goods, so this will instill a strong feeling of confidence among buyers, so they can more likely to perform up to expectation in society. Specifically, a research study in Yale university has found that focus on product development could enhance ability of people to make decision in social and personal life.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propound the view that companies should focus on product development,it enhance people effectiveness and efficiency of local inhabitant evaluation and it increases the people confidence, so it is expected that governments take cognizance of these facts and began to adopt this way of planning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3045112782 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08226890343 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.771426553 50.4703680194 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.375 104.977214359 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 20.9669160288 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.25397266985 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172903373453 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804317688321 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435354650933 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100003672969 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040380221473 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 12.6369458128 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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