In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with notion of compulsory voting?
Or If Voting is compulsory in democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about ‘Nature of Democracy’?
The topic of compulsory voting is controversial in a democratic society. While many people think that it should not be compulsory and there should not be any penalty for not supporting it, many governments believe it should be mandatory to get everyone views in an election. This essay will shed a light on both aspects of this issue and draw a conclusion on the basis of below arguments.
Democracy gives many flexibility and power to an individual citizen to make rules, to choose their leaders and to make better future. Forcing them to do something they don't want is not really a democracy. Many of countries penalize their citizen for failing to participate in an election which does not seems right because people may not have an interest in politics or they are busy or they simply don't care whoever wins or loses. Therefore making a voting system mandatory does not make sense for a democratic nation.
However, everyone opinions play a pivotal role to select right leader for a nation. If well-educated citizen starts making excuses to skip voting because of their job or something else then who will select a good leader? There will be high chances that bad guys can win election making situation even worse. Moreover, it will not be fair if politic wins just by few votes to make a strong constitution for a country.
To sum up, democratic society should give the flexibility to choose whether their citizen wants to vote or not. Despite that fact, voting of every citizen plays a crucial role to select the right person for a country. Overall, looking at the above arguments, I personally believe that voting should be made compulsory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun flexibility seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much flexibility', 'a good deal of flexibility'.
Suggestion: much flexibility; a good deal of flexibility
... of below arguments. Democracy gives many flexibility and power to an individual citizen to m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ture. Forcing them to do something they dont want is not really a democracy. Many of...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...rticipate in an election which does not seems right because people may not have an in...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...olitics or they are busy or they simply dont care whoever wins or loses. Therefore m...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...simply dont care whoever wins or loses. Therefore making a voting system mandatory does n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85512367491 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62165095459 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2133625567 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1619618599 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715988452465 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779829099219 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104434388533 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372710856594 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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