Eating food outside is now becomes norms, Often attributes to first world country’s phenomena, is now wide-spread across the globe, taking over to even developing nations, due to busy lifestyle people consume fast food or food on the go which has many side effects on once wellbeing, In this essay I will discuss my inclination towards imposing higher tax while addressing another side too.
You are the sole responsible for your health and happiness, in our era, we become very busy in our day to day chores that we hardly get time to cook food at home, hence only available option is to get food outside which could be fast and easy. Eating outside for a prolonged time has serious consequences on once health study suggests that people get heart, lungs and other sorts for diseases due to fast food.
In most of the cities, fast food changes are growing like mushrooms in every corner, which will be accessible to anyone, near offices, schools, and parks, instead of eating healthy food more and more people are opting for junk food. Governments and health authorities are running many awareness campaigns, which often results in vain. The government can put more effort and utilize its missionaries to put a ban on fast-food restaurants near schools, parks and put a hefty tax on fast food products, which eventually makes it harder to buy such food at the mass level.
In recapitulation, people should avoid eating fast food, instead, they should go for healthy, home-made food, which will be cheaper and fresh. if the government puts a tax on such items they will get a new revenue stream too.
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... food, which will be cheaper and fresh. if the government puts a tax on such items...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86909090909 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56807095497 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6616250126 50.4703680194 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.375 104.977214359 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 20.9669160288 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29125325388 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135674962606 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356187458932 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182045120141 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164137027767 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.94827586207 292% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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