Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy However others feel that foreign companies should be shut out and instead the government should help the local companies to contrib

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Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy. However, others feel that foreign companies should be shut out and instead the government should help the local companies to contribute to the economic growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a highly debatable issue that government should promote the local companies or encourage the multinational companies. Some people believe that it’s good for the economy while some opine that it's not good for the economy. This essay is going to provide reasons for agreement before reaching to a conclusion.
There are myriad benefits of it. To begin with the positive side, these companies pay better than the other available opportunities. What is more, they train their employees with more sophisticated techniques and which overall help the business in the long run. Further, they also introduce the new technology and innovation which is also a sign of development and growth of the economy. In addition, they promote efficient production and bring a broader range of products to widest possible market.

Moreover, these Mnc’s promote improvement which overall helps the ancillary industries. For instance, if a company opens in the city, then other supporting industry in neighbourhood will open which cater to numerous benefits to the Mnc’s. So, in this way local industries can develop and improve stabilize position in the market. Another major advantage is that local rivals get a chance to become more and more innovative and competitive. For example with the introduction of Sony TV brand in India, local companies like Videocon has improved their standards drastically to compete with it. Besides this, these companies promote nonviolence and positive values such as diversity and integrity and equality for women. That also create an atmosphere of international co-operation.

To sum up with this, Mnc’s’have their negative points to but their positive points are more favourable so Mnc’s should be promoted by the government of developing countries.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5071942446 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06003496463 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0778238673 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 6.9802955665 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214830396223 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642275652567 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610049985552 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128017911672 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280042422332 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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