Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics, and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few individuals feel that school subjects like chemistry, physics, and history must be learned in educational institutions, however, other people think that pupils will get better advantage if they will only study applied courses such as technician and culinary. In my perspective, it necessary to have a basic foundation of knowledge for the former and to secure a job immediately for the latter. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, learning center should ensure to include basic subjects into their curriculum to help students acquire the fundamental principles of particular concept. One can be able to obtain a respectable position in a company in the future once equipped with the core knowledge and information taught during primary and secondary years in university. To illustrate, according to a recent survey conducted on successful graduates that 93% of the alumni of Harvard University has able to secure their dream role from huge corporations.
On the other hand, considering to finish short courses to find a good job must not be ignored. Plenty of individuals who chose not to achieve a diploma or degree but to at least have relevant skills for their target occupation are also triumphant in their field. The path that they have decided to follow might be based upon their low capacity to earn a living as also they wanted to generate income on their own and help their family at all cost. For example, welders and painters who are skilled workers can easily acquire a job in several construction companies.
To recapitulate, school subjects should be greatly given importance as this will aid students develop their knowledge, nevertheless, practical courses can also be considered for those who desire to obtain a career instantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to center'
Suggestion: to center
...ted reasons. To begin with, learning center should ensure to include basic subjects...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, at least, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20962199313 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89175206686 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 139.433497537 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1009158047 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.818181818 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151741582065 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534266896221 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623233978187 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969545436442 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557306740365 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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