Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
There has been a growing trend where people prefer to go to outer space and explore it. While some people think that it is a waste of money as there are significant problems to address it here, some section of people argue that it is of paramount importance as it helps expand our knowledge horizon. I agree with this statement such a journey is a vital need for the upcoming generation. This essay discusses my point of view and will lead to a logical conclusion.
Beyond doubt, exploring outer space must need one, and it helps to expand the human skills. Additionally, it plays an integral part in enhancing people's knowledge, and it makes people train themselves widely. For example, most of the schools conduct science quiz and select the children to send them in outer space to explore it more. Therefore, it benefits them with extra observations about the world along with traditional studies.
There are other noteworthy points to support space traveling. Firstly, it creates more confidence among people, especially children. Children become more knowledgable and confident in their life. Thus, they can face any hassle in the future with more confidence. and they would not fear anything. Therefore, space exploration educates the people on the next level and parents should encourage their children to learn outer space and not pushing them in traditional activities such as tuition, homework and so on.
To conclude, I second my outlook on exploring outer space is prominent among people than thinking it is a waste of money despite legitimate reasons. There is a line between use and abuse, and we should teach our children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...sle in the future with more confidence. and they would not fear anything. Therefore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05494505495 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65126069464 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.999023428 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335101587646 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921560591518 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879782487348 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198244199334 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499871563321 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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