Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Literature is a part of students learning programs in preschool and school classes. Some people believe that only local or country literature shall be among their books and material but I strongly disagree with this idea and really believe that international literature shall also be included in children's daily lessons.

First of all I agree as the world is turning into a global village and children need to understand and communicate with people from other cultures. As the main reflection of the cultures is seen in a country's culture then it becomes even more important for future generation to have inte-cultural understanding enabling to work in a multinational culture.

Secondly I do believe that most war has been started due a misunderstanding between cultures. If our childeren study literature of other countries, then we will have more inter-cultural understanding in next generations and if we achieve this goal then we will face with less wars due to more mutual understandings.

In conclusion it is very important to teach our children the literature of other countries to secure a safer world in future buy creating more understanding of other cultures for them although we shall not ignore our local literature which surly is a part of our history and culture.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun wars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...chieve this goal then we will face with less wars due to more mutual understandings....
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...tries to secure a safer world in future buy creating more understanding of other cu...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16746411483 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1307006565 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9057674769 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.285714286 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.25397266985 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31849876987 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123780822438 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673264895441 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174151144168 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441540213146 0.0609392437508 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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