Some people believe the large shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. What is your opinion?
Big shopping mall is the new necessity of modern era. It provides food courts for all ages, play land for infants and adolcents, pharmecies for patients and cosmetic shops for ladies. Even though, all types of serives are available in one mall. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people that large shopping malls are replacing local shops which are threat to these small shops and bad for local economies. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why there is a need for large shopping malls. One of them is that all the household items are available in one place. Hence, the time of customers is saved as they do not need to find and travel for each item separately. It can also be argued that it is not mandatory that large shopping malls are from different countries. Usually, it happens people invest in large malls so that all type of products is available in one place. It should be taken into account that main thing to benefit the local economy is that the product which is placed in the large mall is locally produced. If the local shops which are selling a branded product then there is no difference in selling that product by shopping malls or local shops.
Those who argue that local shops should exist, have different view and say that it can be actually good thing. Firstly, it can also be claimed that people who are living in apartments should not go for small things to large mall. For instance, it looks awkward that if the tooth paste is finished in home and to buy that thing one needs to go to large mall. For these things, local shops should be available which actually save the time.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that bid shopping mall is not threat to local shops and the local economy. There is need for both shopping malls and small local shops as they are main ingredient to local economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that bid shopping mall is not threat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 10.5418719212 285% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 5.94088669951 337% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 354.0 242.827586207 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56779661017 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17472481156 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0652646806 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504492893806 0.242375264174 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173670447983 0.0925447433944 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135189494383 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349184292945 0.151781067708 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713647125533 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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