Some people believe the large shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. What is your opinion?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that the large shopping malls are replacing local shops is which is bad for local economies. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that large shopping malls can not only contributes to one's life, but also lead to numerous benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages if offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are favour of shopping mall.
In view of argument outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of shopping malls are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73495924395 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0459110738 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.545454545 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214421744806 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848432021018 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164530378948 0.071462118173 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138238396507 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124433537598 0.0609392437508 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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