In recent decades, there has been considerable debate regarding the money-making strategies lead to the contentment of common man. However, few people hold the view that only profitable market plans can bring happiness to individuals life while iota of people oppose this belief and state that there are myriad other factors of joy. As far as I am concerned to this issue , I reckon that both factors are equally crucial to balance a happy living and will elucidate my viewpoint in this essay.
To kick off, it is no exaggeration to say that economic wealth is directly proportional to ecstasy . In other words, when the earnings of a person is more than his expenses and he is capable of having all the luxuries that impulsively turn his life into bliss. To illustrate this , real life example can be taken , when all the market values such as clothing, food, building material, medical ,education are in favor of mediocre man and he can afford all the basic amenities of life then he can spend whole life with utmost happiness. Thus, it is worth stressing that our economic state should be raised and reinforced to rise happiness in everyone's life.
On the latter side , there are numerous means of living a happy life other than solely economic growth. Foremost , environment and colleagues on the workplace , if both the factors are sound , it definitely adds on to your mental peace and naturally makes you a happy person. Besides, if you have been living with a lovable family and cooperative society that is a big boon to one for having a constant support and deliberation. Moreover , it is proverbial that happiness lies in tiny things so if we live in a moment and enjoy every second through thick and thin comes our way from economy.
To recapitulate , according to above proceeding discussion , I am highly inclined towards my notion and strongly think that one factor cannot determine the joviality of people. Therefore , it is intrinsic to consider all the factors to intact the happiness of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, i reckon, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 341.0 242.827586207 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89442815249 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70502496786 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 139.433497537 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598240469208 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 379.143842365 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9949008942 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.384615385 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196951351879 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684597793516 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540428084554 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110296739564 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331540818376 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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