Some people feel that success lies in achieving professional and economics targets,while others say that success lies in spending quality time with family and friend?To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age,there are ongoing debates amongst people all around the world about success. While there are certainly valid arguments to claim that success is gained through professional and economic targets, my view of success is being with family and good friends. In this essay I will describe both sides of the argument.
To begin with there are several reasons why I support success lies in being with family. First and foremost is that being rich and having an appropriate social position in society does not guarantee or warrant happiness. A group of social researchers at Harvard University undertook a study on two groups of different people. The results revealed that those who were rich were more depressed due to less free time and being mentally worn out. This could show that the busier you are, the less time you have to enjoy life and therefore happiness.
On the other hand,it should be mentioned that happiness could be gained through spending time with your family. Statistics have shown that success plays a pivotal role in people's happiness . There are many contributing factors for success such as health and happiness. Although Economic targets and professional achievements contribute to success, success, they can also lead to depression.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, my personal sentiment is that Success and happiness lies in being with family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58631824473 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3400842131 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0769230769 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271461763039 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918803933103 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074065038409 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164400668936 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468890107351 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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