Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Nowadays, its quite general see that people those who keep pets in their home are not very careful about them. Some people say if people are not capable then they should not keep pets, others argue that there is no harm to keep it them even human does not take proper care of them. This essay disagrees with the above statement, I am inclined to believe that if someone does not know to care about domestic animals they should not keep it. This essay will elaborate the same and then lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there is numerous reason but first and foremost is animals also having life. Moreover, they also have the right to live the same way as a human beings. However, some people think that they should take this not vocal living being as granted. For instance, According to one of the survey, 50 percent of the domestically animal people do not take care of them and sometimes keep them outside as well. Therefore, those who are keeping these animals should keep them properly.
Additionally, It has been seen that some people hit them on this small and cute animals. Moreover, it has been observed that children in the area or of that particular pet home exploit them as well from time to time. For instance, One of the NGO those who take care of animal say that most of these animals are in endangered. Thus, the government and organization should come forward to prevent it.
To conclude, we can say that because of cruelty and not taking proper care of these pets we should take proper care of them without further delay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...e right to live the same way as a human beings. However, some people think that they s...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 20.9802955665 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60931899642 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21690310337 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523297491039 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1399430914 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414811073355 0.242375264174 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141179375805 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10461035754 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268622200333 0.151781067708 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515146810492 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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