Some people prefer to spend with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways to sending time do you prefer ? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Some individuals believe to spend with large friend group while some want to make with a couple of their close friend. Both these cases have some advantagess but I prefer to make a large numers of friends so I will discuss about merits of both cases in further paragraphs.
First of all, we have one or two friend, we can share our personal matter to them because they can provide proper advice and that matter never disclose to others. Moreover, this case, there are taken good care for eachother. We can save our precious time when have one or two friends. In addition, whenever we want to get suggestion or information regarding any matter from their so without confusing we get our solutions by our limited friends. One friend means we not have to discuss with more times.
On the other hand, when we make a large group so obviously everyday we have to talk to them or chatting. Moreover, infact, if we involve in big group, we get more help by them. Besides this, we get lot suggestions and know upgrading informations. They always give support to us any bed as well as good situations. Life become happily with every steps. A large group means we have to meet them time to time such as every events and occasions.
To sum-up, every human have different tendency and decides to make friends because some individuals like to touch with one friend and others want to involve in the large groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'friend' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'friends'.
Suggestion: friends
...hs. First of all, we have one or two friend, we can share our personal matter to th...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...happily with every steps. A large group means we have to meet them time to time such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39393901343 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2649794802 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8571428571 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171695142841 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660947163825 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588468238413 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111162045601 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366931927911 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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