Recently the phenomenon of thinking of a healthy life and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated. Although contested by many that the matter of a balanced diet is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that a regular exercise also can be a plus, and I will analyze this two opinion throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, a nutritive diet can provide the society with some noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that merits of a daily marine meal, as well as low-fat foods, are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the effects of a diet full of vitamins. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both dairy and fruits apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, physical activities might increase the consequences of a balanced diet. Moreover, fundamental aspects of sports actions could relate to this reality that the demerits of cardiovascular disease pertain to be pale. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of well-being is correlated negatively with less exercise. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of more body movement.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of physical exercise far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of a healthful living prove the significance of body movement, but also pinpoint good nutrition implication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34980988593 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18377441008 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657794676806 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.774447336 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153090037683 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456218225668 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239060661511 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802699702555 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133804815688 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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