Some people think imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, there has been considerable debate regarding the importing foods into the country and its impacts. I firmly concur with the opinion that the importing foods exert a significant influence on the states, which is beneficial because of a variety of new products, and also they are cheap.
To begin with, the importing foods into the countries has a positive impact such as employing the vareity of products. From my personal experience, a qualitative analysis was conducted by an eminent sociologist to explore further the new commodities and items. Final results revealed that there is a highly complex clear relationship between vegetables and rice and potatoes and apples even though fruits and vitamins and protein and meats should be taken into consideration. Thus, people can be fully informed about sufficient evidence of a causal link between importing the new commodities from the foreigner into the other cities and villages and countries.
Furthermore, bringing new foods into the countries causes the customers, and people consume the cheap fares. For instance, a quantitative research was carried out at the Melbourne University concerning new dishes and consuming the overseas foods and expensive products. Hence, perhaps if the scientific research is significantly correlated with alleviating the prices and costs, the preliminary findings will be closely related to both decreasing the demands and low prices and competitions between companies.
To recapitulate, according to the preceding discussion, I am inclined to the opinion that importing foods engenders declining a prices' of foods, and consumer using different foods. Moreover, not only should national institutions develop strategies, but also they should formulate them to encourage the companies to import the products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a prex', 'a price' or simply 'prices'?
Suggestion: a prex; a price; prices
...hat importing foods engenders declining a prices of foods, and consumer using different ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60727272727 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00105546172 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.6880397081 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131607232858 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548657892783 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490365910655 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080875048155 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265263597358 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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