Some people think that, it is better to teach girls and boys together. What is your opinion about this? Discuss.
one of the most conspicous trend of today's world is colossal upsurge in propagating equality between girls and boys. Similarly, Some group of people think that it is better to teach girls and boys together, while other oppose the same. I m with the opinion that both should be given same training at same pace. Following essay will present the views which support my statement.
There are deluge of agruments in favor of my stance. The most prepoderant one is todays world awlays prefer girls and boys in all the feild they applied, but at school level still parents are preferring girls school for girls and merely boys school for boys. This tendency still support the inequality between between because unless both the gender will not come together and play in competition till then thwy wont be judgemental and cannt be able to predict what is good or bas for both.
Another pivotal aspect of my agrument is school is the base of all acheivemnet that has been taken long in carrer so if children are kept apart they wont learn about each other. And if we expect that girl are equal to man they can do all the things that a man can do without letting them know their limitations and capabilites agianst boys.
one can conclude from above stances, that girls and boys shoud be trated same since childhood to avoid any insecutity or inequality between them.
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...hich support my statement. There are deluge of agruments in favor of my stance. The...
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...lied, but at school level still parents are preferring girls school for girls and merely boys ...
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...s tendency still support the inequality between between because unless both the gender will not...
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...tions and capabilites agianst boys. one can conclude from above stances, that g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, still, then, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71966527197 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30415944547 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623430962343 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0407748895 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196981982091 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727430669067 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107919721926 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106693489988 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711927763392 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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