Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the behaviors of people are affected by many factors, the major factor is the law. Some people believe that people behaviors could be affected by applying the law, while others argue that laws regulation cannot change the human behavior unless the individual changes his attitude. This essay will discuss the reason why applying the rules could change the human behavior.
Applying rules lead people to change their behaviors. Some countries legislate their rules by applying fines, while others depend on the religions to demonstrate the rules for people. For example, in the USA, the US government has applied solid rules on its citizens, which eventually, have led people to respect the law. Therefore, people behavior could be changed by applying the rules, especially if these rules are applied equally to all people.
On the other hand, some people think that rules could not change people attitude, where some people refuse to follow the law. For example, people to sell drugs and alcohol do not follow the rules. But these people are unaware of the fact that most governments these days legislate high fines and longer prison years for people who do not follow the rules. Thus, the law changes the human behavior.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how the law changes the human behaviors, either through applying high fined or through arresting people for long years. In my opinion, I believe that human behavior could be changed by applying a strong rule and treat people equally without any preferences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rules could change the human behavior. Applying rules lead people to change the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.144 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34409556119 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0208426162 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38721605925 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180824448904 0.0925447433944 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109086346264 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277093436847 0.151781067708 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102375289831 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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