Some people think that student benefit from going to private schools, other, however feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that private schools has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always held conflicting views on this topic. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
To begin with, there are ample of merits of private schools. One of the major benefits is quality of education. What is more, students can get good infrastructure and can learn under good atmosphere. Furthermore, most of the private schools have well qualified staff as compare to government schools.
Nevertheless, there are few disadvantages of convent schools. Nowadays most of the parents prefer to send their children to private schools, due to this there is to much competition among students. Academic budget is a major issue. Parents are take the burden expensive books and school dress. Thus it is harmful for the students and society.
To sum up, I firmly believe that, undoubtedly, private schools have plethora of benefits for society. However there are lots of demerits of this trend which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 190.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17894736842 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81377694927 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9381584827 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6 104.977214359 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.9669160288 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270578216629 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746730644525 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464201355209 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149913363443 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402609952836 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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