some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. which opinion do you agree with and why?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge some people should think women not work in all over the world. There are a wide range of factors that account for why this happening. In my opinion, this problem can be remedied provided that some people effective measures are taken
There are a myriad of others believe that a women’s role should be limited to taking care of the house with soaring concerns. Unlike everyday problem, which can be dept with easily, which is extremely lead to an array of such issues as work and excel in their careers. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments. It is not only people but also society which can suffer immensely.
Steps to deal with problem are many, but the most effective ones are in fact not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from fact that by ensuring the implementation of set rules and policies. Government authorities, which can help a nation, thrive. Besides, international organization and local authorities should take the necessary initiatives cumulatively. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, Can we expect to see some considerable progress in curbing the issue.
To conclude, dealing with taking care of the house and children is one of the most prevalent problems that faced from all the parts of the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...fective measures are taken There are a myriad of others believe that a women's r...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
...be dept with easily, which is extremely lead to an array of such issues as work and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, nevertheless, so, then, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14117647059 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88941644844 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5560391921 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310602340713 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808129483271 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10776305874 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182989883014 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130526347912 0.0609392437508 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 79.0 Out of 90
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