Some people would like to be a part of a group whereas others would like to be a leader. Which one would you prefer?

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Some people would like to be a part of a group whereas others would like to be a leader. Which one would you prefer?

Surely there has no time in history, where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals part of a group and leader has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always intrigued to analyze and explain part of group and leader. Regarding this I would say that I am partially agree with this statement. Let’s delve deeper about this in forthcoming paragraph.
Looking at darker side of the essay, that most of people like to be part of group in collages, companies, society, universities and so on. Moving ahead, masses like to do work in a group because they feel it will good for them and they take help or different ideas from them. Secondly, ones want something extra or strange and they can not achieve without others help.
On the flip side of the discussion, It is really not good for human when they choose a leader and do work with them. Furthermore, leader always show their attitude in front of common man. Moreover, leader always think that he is big, intelligent, powerful as compare to others in the group.
In a nutshell, I would like to say that part of a group is good option and good way to achieve their goal and success in their life S o people should try to make groups in every institutions.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ng this I would say that I am partially agree with this statement. Let's delve d...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...oking at darker side of the essay, that most of people like to be part of group in collages, c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62931034483 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58469783559 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599137931034 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3910092682 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290875829507 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882552213164 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639434172772 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156909572692 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460480449646 0.0609392437508 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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