Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree?
In modern world music is considered as one of the main entertainment method for majority of the people irrespective of the age of them. In this essay I would discuss on the pros and cons of teaching music at school.
On my point of view music should be taught in every student because it helps to balance their education life and release stress on studies. Not only music all aesthetic subjects must be taught in schools in order to improve creativity of children. This will stimulate their brain cells to innovate things in their adult life. Besides that there is a huge market exist for entertainment business in the modern world. Therefore those who has talents in music can improve their skills and enter into the entertainment business while becoming a renowed artist.
However some people think that time spent on teaching music is in vain and they think that children can use that time to improve their knowledge on academic studies such as science, maths, languages or technological studies.
In conclusion I would recommended to teach music especially to the pre schoolers because it will make them happy and also it will inffluence to attend to school as well. In modern world most of the people depend on a single income source, therefore knowledge on music can also help them to set up a secondary income source in order to survive in the modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83050847458 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57402611812 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7777724993 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972451574912 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403934543269 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283812234195 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612176392824 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131293819705 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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