Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion
Nowadays, there is an ongoing deliberation how music plays an important role in students life for learning prospective, which attracted plethora of controversies and drawn the attention from the public. it can be agreed that, music is consider as therapy for many things and improve concentration also, whereas other side of people hold contrary views. This essay will discuss both sides and lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous benefits of music in scholars life, but the most essential is to support for their concentration towards the study, as well as it also help to improve mental health and heal emotional pain. As per recent research conducted by Oxford university resulted, 80% of undergraduate prefer to listen music when they feel under pressure for exams to release their tension. Therefore, music helps students on every level to improve their performance on each area.
Nevertheless, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that, music distract students from their study and lead them to negative performance. To over counter their argument, I would like to assert music therapy has been proven by many research for their advantages over weight to disadvantages. Hence, music also improve mental patient conditions and provide them piece full environment.
Agglomerating all points above, it can be concluded that, music is beneficial for young students to improve their mental health and motivate them to perform better in their studies. As per my prospective, schools and educational institution should have mandatory subject of music for every pupils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42913385827 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80573622144 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3171120305 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125954253557 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503969998086 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333724166677 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080579248852 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254146971018 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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