Some type of employment are more suitable for men and other types for females . To what extend do you agree with this statement ? Support your answer with reason and examples from your own experience.
It is irrefutable to say that discriminating between genders in the work place is not a new thing it had been there since ages. Some believe that both men and women can do whatever they desire and others oppose to that notion. I believe jobs cannot be categorized by sexes and allowing both to choose a career what they are comfortable and enjoy.
To begin with, from the very beginning of the human existence both men and female had to hunt for food and construct shelter, both had to work hand in hand; however; the senario is different now and female can choose what work they wish to do whether official, household or the one that needs lot of physical strength. Moreover, it is personal choice and these types of restriction are no longer practiced in societies and now we see more women in air force and police force. For instance, according to New York police department the number of female enrollment has escalated in past few years compared to that of a decade ago
Despite of aforementioned facts, work place that require extensive physical strength, or violent such as military and fire person are avoided by female because women are soft hearted by nature and they prefer jobs like nurses childcare or the one in offices which consists of calmer environment.
To recapitulate, choosing a job is purely personal choice and women of this generation are confronting every hurdle and obstacles to overcome this misogynistic society to do a work of their choice and have a name for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to overcome this misogynistic society to do a work of their choice and have a nam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81923076923 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68377494008 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592307692308 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.227787475 50.4703680194 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.0 104.977214359 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1428571429 20.9669160288 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155717039629 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646829067584 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424657009782 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817070174438 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528895082088 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 12.6369458128 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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