Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.'
To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the usage of english language in almost every part of the world, thanks to globalisation. there is a widespread worry that increased exposure of other languages and cultures will threaten the dominance of english language. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
there are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to globalisation, the interaction between people from different languages and diverse cultural backgrounds will inevitably increase. As english is already the most widely used language throughout the world, not only will it help people to communicate effectively with each other, but it will also be embraced by more and more people. Needless to say, this universal appeal of english will keep it in a preponderant position, as far as gaining more popularity is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that now english is the language of Science, Commerce, trade, arts, history, literature, media, entertainment and what not. Unlike in the past, when the world was not much connected without a common language and so it was next to impossible to keep abreast with the latest happenings, nowadays english has helped mankind overcome all communication barriers. Hence, the likelihood that english will thrive, flourish and spread rapidly is very high.
language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: EN-US;mso-bidi-language:EN-US">In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the apprehension that english language will lose its value because of globalisation is ungrounded indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64980544747 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.09974945773 2.71678728327 151% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6530631611 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704146137098 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028160321192 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308002496801 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415437973848 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324388806583 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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