Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.
To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
In the recent decades, most of people think some type of jobs are appropriate for women, on the other hand some other employments are suitable for men. I partially disagree with this kind of believe because I claimed that each job needs skill, enthusiasm and knowledge to be done professionally and gender never plays a significant role in it. In this essay we are going to debate both sides and reach a conclusion.
The First and for most, some people think some careers are suitable for woman and some are appropriate for men. It would be partially true but the reason might be because of the way of nurturing a child. In fact, from the beginning years of a girl, she was taught that a woman could cook and clean the house rather than a man and it is not suitable for her to follow her interest on mannish jobs. Besides this happened to boys as well. For example, when I was a child it is very unrealistic or imaginary that a girl wanted to be a pilot or mechanical engineer, even if she adores it.
Secondly, I want to discuss why I was against the appropriate job for each gender. I believe that each career needs its own skill, knowledge and the most important factor in choosing a job as the interest of the person. So if a person has been taught properly in each field without noticed his or her gender, they would have been successful in that field. For instance, according to the resent news we have a very popular and successful woman who becomes a pilot in a country that its people think being a pilot is not suitable for a girl and being a house wife is the main duty of every women.
To conclude, Although people believe that some jobs are suitable for men and some are for women, I think there is some other factors to indicate that which person could reach the goal and being successful forget about their genders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
In the recent decades, most of people think some type of jobs are appropriate...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a conclusion. The First and for most, some people think some careers are suita...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.5418719212 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 338.0 242.827586207 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44970414201 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41154570281 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488165680473 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.028525849 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231673609463 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868112342554 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09352281524 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16188866114 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586769310605 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.1260098522 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.5310837438 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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