The space travel is fantastic these days, but there are many issues, such as environmental problems, on our planet that we should be focusing. What do you think about money allocation?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals that space travelling has been one of the prominent issues in the contemporary discussions. people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the negative aspects of space travelling on environment and monetary budget of government. considering that, I would say space exploration should be performed considering our society conditions.
one compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that space exploration requires a lot of equipments which are expensive. Due to this, it affects the gross development index of a particular country. To put into perspective, America has originated a mass mission in the year 1988, which adversely affected their economy growth.
Looking back into introduction, one could also argue that space travel also tends to affect our surrounding environment. this is because, space travel requires fuels, which consists of many harmful gases like carbon monoxide that can prove to be harming the ozone layer surrounding our earth.
Hence, based on the arguments above, we can conclude that space travelling not only has exacerbating effects on our environment but also affect our economy. Therefore, I believe space exploration has more cons as compared to its cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36818181818 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94512834894 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640909090909 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9862672862 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179045339353 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631742871007 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049350374693 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106627322435 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458491957649 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.