Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and the negative effects on society due to foreign university education for higher studies. while it is possible to claim that the foreign education has the better quality education, my point of view that the local education system is the most familier to the domestic students. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analysing defferent sides of the argument to a greater extent.
First and foremost, there are myraid benefites a nation and a person can achieve from local education such as security, family life quality, integrity, confidentiality, availability, other government espionage, and usability of the life. For example, China has improved the local university education system; therefore, their students do not request educational assistance from foreign universities. Thefore, it is taken into consideration that the domestic education is the most important for local students.
On the other hand, those who believed the other side of the argument have a different point of view and say that foreign education has the better life quality, usability, and it’s a future investment. Fore instance, Australian universities have modern vocational education and a high demand. therefore, it is considered the the foreign education has the latest technology and data encapulation. But, that technology will be better to that culture.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that the better education has in local high schools. In nutshell, students and professionals should take scientific actions to mitigate this hazard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52380952381 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0111282643 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8810418113 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0480161299979 0.242375264174 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196441139535 0.0925447433944 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202298499979 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313454965895 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00685878069288 0.0609392437508 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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