students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? support your point of view with reason and/or example from your own experience.
education is more important in today's era, that too for the student until the age of eighteen because schools are this place were we can learn many things in our life. In below paragraph we discuss more points detailly about the agree or disagree.
Firstly, I agree with this point that student should stay in school till their age of eighteen and it’s about 12th standard. education in school was we can learn the discipline and respects towards other people there are many things to learn in school like sports, extracurricular activities ext..,. school-age is the stepping stone for all the students in their future. For example, I had a friend who did not complete his education in school he went off and doing work with his uncle's shop. he doesn’t know how to behave in social places. If he could have been studied he knows how to behave in social places. So that we can learn in schools only.
But, in some schools, they do not have the proper staff to guide the student's activities and the faculties are lethargic. they can even teach them a discipline not only in subjects.
All in all, students must stay in school up to the age of eighteen then only they can know how to behave and how to give respects toward the people.
- Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience 77
- the claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970's. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? should zoos be banned? 72
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual? 77
- As most people spend their major part of their adult life in work Job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being What factor contributes to job satisfaction How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers 78
- Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
education is more important in todays era, that t...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...h we discuss more points detailly about the agree or disagree. Firstly, I agree with...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
...teen and it's about 12th standard. education in school was we can learn the discipli...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
... in school like sports, extracurricular activities ext..,. school-age is the stepping ston...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...e sports, extracurricular activities ext..,. school-age is the stepping stone for ...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...sports, extracurricular activities ext..,. school-age is the stepping stone for al...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: School-age
...rts, extracurricular activities ext..,. school-age is the stepping stone for all the stude...
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Suggestion: He
...ff and doing work with his uncles shop. he doesn't know how to behave in soci...
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Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...;t know how to behave in social places. If he could have been studied he knows how...
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Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e knows how to behave in social places. So that we can learn in schools only. But,...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...vities and the faculties are lethargic. they can even teach them a discipline not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66216216216 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39748417363 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.838831757 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196565762701 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750429913047 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814405235668 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11018520232 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501238428982 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 55.0591133005 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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