In this day and age, it is recommended that students should remain at school until 18 years old. Although this suggestion regarded as thoroughly constructive by many people around the world, there are a large number of people with opposing viewpoint. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons in the requirement of staying students in school until the age of eighteen. At first, the school prepare students for university. there are many studies in university that should be learned in primary level and it is the task of school. For example, many lessons in the university need to the branches of mathematics and the mathematical could be taught in school in public level.
In addition, while many introvert children cannot communicate with others, school is an ideal place for this students. they could learn how to communicate with other classmates that is a lesson for future in their life. For instance, a recent research conducted by MTU University researchers in 2014 shows that there are a significant number of school group works that are useful to experience social communications and activities.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, my personal sentiment is that school can enable students to continue their education in college and social relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18666666667 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88462591451 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1085675336 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.090909091 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258924378362 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113180903656 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945998732197 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152703918621 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704118309343 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.