In a modern world, everyone wants to be a successful person. But, what is the success; how can someone get success; how can you measure the success. For that, everyone makes their role model according to their interests. People follow and compare their successes with them. Nowadays, most of the youngsters like sports stars or film stars and make them their role model. I personally feel that it is the good thing, but if, they follow the right person. In subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss my point of view in the above statement.
To begin with the role model, every child has their own role models and they follow them frantically. Sometimes, it is the best thing because most of the sports stars and successful film stars reach their respective position by doing extremely hard work which influences other people vitally. For example, M.S. Dhoni, a successful cricketer, basically belongs to a middle-class family and initially, he did not have any resources to play cricket but he did so much hard work and got the chance to play for Indian cricket team. Likewise, there is so many examples are in the present world.
On the flip side, most of the film stars and sports stars are good, however, some of them have bad habits such as smoking, sledding, etc. which is not at all good habits. And adolescents should aware of it. They should know about their role model before following them frantically.
In the nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds that to make spots stars and glamorous film stars as a role model is a decent thing. But young adults should follow their good habits, rather than, following them blindly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, so, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46143468617 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3791793356 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2941176471 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342549581392 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102562245586 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114267500448 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223779030982 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262456112499 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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