Nowadays, most of the youngsters like sports stars or famous film stars and make them their role model. I individually feel that it is the good thing, but if, they follow the right person. In subsequent paragraphs, I will discuss my point of view in the agreement of the above statement.
To begin with the agreement, every child has their own role models and they follow them frantically. Sometimes, it is the best thing because most of the sports stars and successful film stars reach their respective position by doing extremely hard work which influences other people vitally. For example, M.S. Dhoni, a successful cricketer, basically belongs to a middle-class family and initially, he did not have any resources to play cricket but he did so much hard work and got the chance to play for Indian cricket team. Likewise, there is so many examples are in the present world.
On the flip side, most of the film stars and sports stars are good, however, some of them have bad habits such as smoking, sledding, etc. which is not at all good habits. And adolescents should aware of it. They should know about their role model before following them frantically.
In the nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds that to make spots stars and glamorous film stars as a role model is a decent thing. I personally agree with it, But, young adults should follow their good habits, rather than, following them blindly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, so, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88842975207 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53084583826 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599173553719 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9511886686 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336149713032 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106253773129 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124881235812 0.071462118173 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212321591642 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223287709629 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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