technological access to online music
The importance of technological access to online music and the like should be free or paid. Which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that it provides helps to struggling singers and composers, so that they learn musical things from new technology. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that poor individuals can also have access to music and they also provide motivation to the upcoming singers. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
On the other hand, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that it reduces market value and popularity of a composed music. Besides, it decreases motivation of singers. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of technological access to online music and the like should be free or paid are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18076923077 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78891243039 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6788853158 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225229561484 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826491887756 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151681748281 0.071462118173 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141690460893 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793004756334 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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