In our technological world, the number of new inventions has been increasing. Please describe a new invention, and determine whether it will bring advantages or disadvantages.
Recently, the phenomenon of the number of new inventions and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of an increase in recent inventions is highly beneficial, such issue is regarding thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that robots can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social stanpoint, living with robots as a new invention can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of the technology as well as the modern life are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the easier life. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both decreasing physical activities and obtaining new information apparently can be seen.
Whithin the realm of science, up-to-date accomplishments might increase the consequences of using robots for helping humans. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of the technological world could relate to this reality that the demerits of describing different attitudes pertain to an useful knowledge. As a tangible example, some scientific researches undertaken by a prestigious university has assertet the downside of a new invention is correlated negatively with some scientists. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconeived notion of better future.
To conclude, while there are several complling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of new discoveries far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of exploring new inventions prove the significance of innovators, but also pinpoint the useful implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...cial stanpoint, living with robots as a new invention can provide the society with some notic...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...scribing different attitudes pertain to an useful knowledge. As a tangible example...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...iversity has assertet the downside of a new invention is correlated negatively with some scie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59245283019 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27712331197 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4003028624 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266614624454 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814402513205 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610265873291 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149409113815 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306376509744 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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