Technology allows us to have usefulness and interesting life than in past? Do you agree or disagree?
In this modern world, there is an ongoing deliberation on the use of technology in day to day activities. While some people argue that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages, on my point of view I think people get more benefits from the use of technology. In this essay, I shall discuss on the factors strengthening my arguement while analyzing both sides of it.
Firstly, there are myriad of advantages people can benefit such as improve efficiency of work while maximizing the effectiveness. For instance, people can enjoy their lives at home through mini theatres and also they can communicate with people within short time period irrespective of the distance. In addition, cooking has also become less hectic due to the machineries used in the kitchen.
On the other hand, some people point out the adverse impacts occured due to technological advancements. For example, people get less exercises due to advance technologies such as vehicles and other machineries. Moreover, computer games and internet discourage young people in engage in physical fitness activities. Therefore, in health perspective there is a minor risk involve in technology irrespective of its usefulness and enthusiasm.
In conclusion, it is recommended to use technology knowing it's consequences especially by the younger generation. It is also beleived, that governments must take necessary actions and make piece of legislature, to mitigate the it's negative impacts. Finally, individuals bears the responsibility to maximize benefits from technology while minimizing it's adverse affects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5601659751 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21318863255 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1046981505 50.4703680194 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4615384615 7.25397266985 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.087799266685 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366090814644 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350140759496 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558279259428 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223132312416 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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