Television has many useful functions to play in everyone’s life, for some its relaxation, for some it is the companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
The importance of television which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of reason has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion the former latter appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate the positive effect of this trend and thus will lead be a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain the argument of the most preponderant one stem from the fact that it is true that tv has become an important part of many people. As a result many people use tv as a source of entertainment. Another aspect of this argument is that now this time television play an crucial role of our life Needless to say all this merits stand in a good stead.
elaborating my viewpoint, this trend has some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that some of them use television to relax, whereas other use it get news or for education purposes. Consequently: television is also used by many people to get the news as well as to learn things. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of television.
In conclusion, according to this argument aforementioned above above one can reach a conclusion benefits of television are instrumental indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91416309013 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81145036656 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56652360515 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2930026449 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.090909091 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.25397266985 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133020087276 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507556906242 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563046046471 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813835015835 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071820727245 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.