Television has many useful functions to play in everyone's life, for some its relaxation, for some it is
companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
The modern era is full of electronic devices like Television, CD player, games etc. People entertained and enjoyed while doing these activities. These days, there is an ongoing debate that everyone's life has an impact of these electronic devices like Television. In this essay, I will discuss my point of view by providing examples.
Nowadays, after hectic work life, people want relaxation time to provide proper time for the brain to rehabilitate. Most of the people took TV as source of relaxation and they used to watch drama series daily by enjoying the time with their family. For instance, according to a survey done in early 21st century showed that rating of any program telecasted at 9 p.m. in the evening has very high. Hence, this means viewers of the program are watching it with their families as this is the best source of the entertainment.
Similarly, watching television throughout the day can affect the health of a person. Social interaction of people would be compromised. Moreover, people who watched television for 10 hours a day have eyesight issues. For example, a study done by the University of Health Science revealed that exposing to electromagnetic ray for more period of time had adverse effects on human retina. Therefore, people should watch the television in a balanced way.
In a nutshell, watching television play a vital role in people's life. The essay discussed my point of view for Television impact on our daily life and its deleterious and harmful effects on human health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04365079365 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77959974262 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9732596263 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17924584348 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576643984626 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520754449802 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117317058878 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646146128034 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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