There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays
Listening to the music become increasingly popular since recent past. There are enormous types of music today across the globe. Some people think that traditional music of a country is much more important while others think that the international music becomes more vital now. This essay will discuss that why traditional music in a country is still important.
Music is a global language where everyone can feel regardless ethnicity or region. Several types of music genres including
rock, hip-hop, R&B and country are the few very popular across the world which has sung in various languages. To substantiate
my point of view, I hereby put forth an example, one can love to listen to the Indian Hindi songs albeit he doesn't
understand the meaning of songs. In short, Music does not belong to a specific country or a style, rather, it is an international language which one's mind can be soothed.
Traditional music is the roots of modern-day music. It is the back born of today's international music and many internationally known music legends and music genres were influenced firstly by the traditional local music.
For example, Rap music initially started with black slaves where they found a way to express their feelings and now it became a famous music genre. In other words, traditional music still holds a prime place in the music world.
This essay has argued that traditional music is the main entry point of any other modern global music today.
In my opinion, conventional country music still shining and compete for the today's international music hence
authorities should encourage to study it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, still, while, for example, in short, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12030075188 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66962825726 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9843175582 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.570554598005 0.242375264174 235% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243540314834 0.0925447433944 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118262469742 0.071462118173 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233360762511 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174820459808 0.0609392437508 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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