These days some people involved in dangerous activities such as extreme skiing, motorcycles jumping etc. Whether you support them or not.
The substantial influence of extreme sports has sparked the controversy among the public around the globe in recent years. While specifically, arguments claim that dangerous activities should come to a halt, a group of luminaries dispute otherwise and hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined highly to accept that adventurous sports should be preserved in spite of causing likely serious injuries. The agenda of this article elaborates the effects of risk-taking exercises, which clarifies how they impact people’s lives.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why extreme sports should be stopped, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that being keen on doing these sort of exciting experiences might result in serious injuries either mentally or physically such as depression or permanent body injuries. For instance, a recently undertaken study in Adelaide University has revealed that 40% of people interested in doing dangerous sports are suffering from mental problems and are not able to do their own tasks due to physical disabilities. Hence, it can be clearly seen that such sports could lead to severe threats to our lives.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that experiencing risk-taking sports develop self-confidence among individuals, as well as assisting them to better facing up challenges. For example, from my own experience, when I was in University, always doing adventurous sports helped me to overcome my fears and to enhance my self-confidence. Therefore, the advantages of doing such exciting sports should not be neglected.
After pondering over a great deal of thought and deliberation with myself, I have come to the conclusion that doing dangerous activities play a leading role in improving persons’ self-confidence, as well as helping them in tackling their problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...es in the fact that being keen on doing these sort of exciting experiences might result in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, sort of, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50877192982 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19150920321 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5819572016 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.727272727 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994703931966 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371979776655 0.0925447433944 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222174981566 0.071462118173 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608704754199 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192516272379 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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