In today’s world different govt and international organisation are conforting many problem. What is the most pressing problem among them?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of problems facing the whole world, with pollution being the biggest of all. There are a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In my opinion, this problem can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken.
There are a myriad of consequences associated with this growing concern. The most preponderant one is that pollutants from the industries and other sources contribute to deteriorating the environment. Not only can pollution affect the environment badly, but it can also have an adverse impact on people’s health. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on flora and fauna.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most effective ones are not remote or complicated, but accessible and practicable. The primary one lies in the fact that the government should introduce stringent laws and regulations to ensure that the industries use eco-friendly measures in producing goods. Besides, international organisations can raise funds and thus help unprivileged nations to fight off pollution in every sphere. Last but not least, an awareness programme should be initiated to aware people about the harmful effects of pollution.
Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable progress in this growing concern.
To conclude, dealing with pollution is one of the most prevelant problems that faces almost all countries of the world today. Nevertheless, these concrete steps as discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ective measures are taken. There are a myriad of consequences associated with this gr...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable progress'.
Suggestion: considerable progress
...ctors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable progress in this growing concern. To conclude, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, nevertheless, so, then, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37218045113 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00827293177 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2598440721 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150535371218 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527715270542 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729840721313 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864519960993 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668263084466 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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