Tourism can bring jobs and money into struggling economies. However, some people argue that tourism should not be promoted in natural environments because of the harm that it does.
Discuss your view and support it with reasons or examples from your own experience.
Tourism is a booming industry nowadays which allows people to travel across the world. It is considered by many that tourism helps to create new jobs that brings economic development for any country, albeit other people believe that it destroy our natural environment as well. This essay will elaborate the reasons why tourism can both create the jobs as well as can devastate our natural environment and will give my opinion.
To start with, tourism is a sector which involves many individuals to serve the people. Most notably, local residents are get benefited out of this sector because they get the chance to commence their own small businesses or get employment. According to a survey conducted at IMT Shimla, reveals that more than 50% of people are getting employment through tourism industry only in Shimla by engaging in small restaurants, guest houses, taxi service, tour guides etc. Hence, indeed tourism is a means to create jobs and thrives struggling economies.
On the other side, tourism does have certain hidden pitfalls as well with respect to destruction of our nature. When people visit other places, they do not know much about that place and the norms to follow there. For instance, Kaziranga National Park in Assam state of India got highly affected by the tourism sector because people do not follow the instructions and making the place adverse by their activities. In short, our natural environments really get affected by the tourism.
This essay discussed how tourism leads to develop numerous source of employment for local people, but it also devastate our environment at the same time. In my opinion, I personally believe that tourism should be restricted to save our natural environments.
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Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, really, so, well, for instance, in short, as well as, in my opinion, to start with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14539007092 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59870050287 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3085497229 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253602822783 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969537991125 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046235172402 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153373189926 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331549971298 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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