Tourism industry is benefit for any country or not
In recent year, there has been a noticeable shift from industry to services such as tourism. People believe that tourism industry will greatly contribute to economic growth while others suggest that the industry will have a minimal contribution to economy. This essay will discuss why countries should integrate tourism into their development agenda.
The development of commercial airflight and low cost transport makes travelling affordable to many people. Tourism generates a number of employment opportunities for locals. For instance, a visitor will have demand on accommodation, transportation, dining services and entertainments. This benefits both businesses operating these services and their suppliers such as food suppliers and electricity and gas providers. With a good strategy to drive the industry, tourism creates jobs and increases spending in local community. As a result, government should promote tourism industry.
Travelling gives people opportunities to refresh themselves and learn new things. Tourism boosts creativity of local people and businesses. It has become more and more competitive because many countries have developed their tourism industry. To attract visitors, local businesses will develop their products or services to boost customers spending and give their customers unique experiences. A good reputation will bring more visitors coming to a country as well as keep them coming back. There is no reason why government should limit their resources to develop this sector.
This essay argued that countries should support the tourism industry. In my opinion, this creates jobs in local community and increases the creativity of local businesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ses the creativity of local businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8185483871 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96734470957 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.901455286 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.8823529412 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242592227817 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783337042175 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628165310077 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14704007897 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058977754387 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.88 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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