Is tourism in less developed countries advantage or disadvantage?Discuss your view points and give you opinion.
In our world there are lots of countries some are well developed while other are not developed and many countries are developing.In less developed countries the tourism are less this is the big disadvantage for those countries.While some people says that no tourism in country is beneficial for all.I will discuss both vies points as well as i will discuss my opinion in further paragraph.
On the one hand, the tourism is the very important in every country.Those who are less developed countries they bulid the tourists destinations and also maintain the historical buildings these things are help to increase the tourism and country can popular also. For example the India is developing countries because of tourism.In India there are lots of tourists destinations like taj mahal, red fort and golden temple.Many people go there to want to see and gain the general knowledge. And, tourism is the best way to increase they economic rates and to sale more products which is good for country development.
On the other hand, some individuals says that tourism cannot maintain things and some are create violence which is bad for all people. The many tourists are not obey rules.
Overall, my opinion is that government can care the tourists destination and build more and more because Tourism is the best way to developed country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 31.9359605911 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06334841629 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73570484474 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511312217195 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.71042464 50.4703680194 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.857142857 104.977214359 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.9669160288 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288643633042 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116789464043 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107047081354 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165027877855 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118077172375 0.0609392437508 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.94827586207 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.5123152709 295% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.