Tourism in a less developed country has both disadvantages and advantages. Discuss your point.
Tourism is backbone for country's economy and has drastic impact on any country reputation while some believe that tourism is essential part for country and helps in various economic factors, others maintain that tourism has negative influence on country traditions and culture. This essay will discuss why, tourism helps any partially developed country to boost economy and have more wight rather than disturbing the image of any country.
At some point in the near future, tourism in less developed country become appropriate means for earning wealth, boost hospitalization industries, spread out country's fame in world. For instance, tourism will bring exposure to country's people in terms of increase employment, hospitality, local traders and helps to develop country by earning wealth. As a result of this, country will develop its specific regions to attract more tourists all over the World.
Despite the advantages of it, some people do not think that it is good idea to expose country tradition outside to World. Even though it brings health and wealth to country, However it is also real dilemma for some people who believe that tourist may alter their ancient culture and people get influence by them. Moreover, they can bring new inventions to local people which can hurt their sentiments.
Tourism is essential for any less developed country to assist them in logical way.In my opinion, country should make practices to attracts more tourism in order to nation's growth. i would strongly recommended that country should adopt this types of strategy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50944571274 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598393574297 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0650515027 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276633517429 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116701968453 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852353827325 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178332326858 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932880277963 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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