. In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?

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. In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by zjaved on Thu, 05/09/2019 - 07:43

Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that in urban settings, the trend of replacing small shops into large shopping malls is accelerating. I, personally believe that this trend is quiet beneficial for every citizen who are living in town and cities. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the key features of this essay before deducing any final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that big shopping malls are more suitable to customers who are living in cities. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that in urban dewellings, due to heavy traffic large shopping malls are quiet adequate for people to shop under one roof without facing the car parking issues. As a prime example, in developed nations and in some of the developing countries, large shopping malls are largely been replaced by local shops to entertain people without facing great trouble which includes, parking issues, separate tracks for elderly and kids and much more.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that availability of local and international brands attract customers of every age to enjoy shopping in comfortable environment. Moreover, play area and food courts for kids are available for families to enjoy. Furthermore, nursing rooms and separate rest rooms are provided to facilitate mothers and other people.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that large shopping malls in town and cities are not only a suitable option in varies aspects but also provides people a range of facilities. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29104477612 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69377143508 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4137251113 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314362368122 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106353364016 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961301612209 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171582437756 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804956141155 0.0609392437508 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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