Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that advancement in medical is responsible to increase human life expectancy. I, personally believe that this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important features of this statement before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that medical technology helps to live life. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that in this contemporary world advanced surgical procedures, which include, open heart surgery, angiography, laprotomy and other advanced drugs help to cure some of the major life threatning diseases. As a prime example, in most of the developed nations treatment of high risk cancers are now cured by various other advanced techniques, such as chemotherapy, radiotherapy and surgical resection.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that some people considered this blessing of medical technology a cure for society. Therefore, they believe that medical advancements decrease mortality rates of mother and newborn which further increases the population growth and provokes the issues related to it.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned propounds that medical technology is not only a great help to deal with serious health issues but also a blessing for society to live a healthy life. Therefore, ideas that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54464285714 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97588093628 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.766949902 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260916514326 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102505947753 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129689232102 0.071462118173 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172175683739 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114181987619 0.0609392437508 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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