Recently, the phenomenon of appearing the large shopping malls in the cities and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that replacing them with small local shops is highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that this changing can be a plus, and I will analyze throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with this viewpoint. At first, one of the disadvantages of large shopping centers is their far distance than local small shops. However, having a large variety of products covered their waste of distance. For example, people have not to go to different shops such as grocery and bakery to purchase their needs.
In addition, the small companies may not compete with large companies to sell their crops in the large shopping centers. But, they force the companies to compete with each other to present their products in a better capacity. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that experts in a significant number of advanced countries believe that in large shopping malls people can find better and cheaper products in local small shops.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the large shopping centers are far outweighed their drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23728813559 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80541756436 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3420617763 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.363636364 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26564500087 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1003161669 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693005715928 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160103957296 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353442569683 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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